My first trailer

[PowerDeo]

Hey, im planning to make a movie, its going to be around 15 minutes and here's the trailer of it. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7CGv_1abLw
Can u guys tell me what to make better or stuff like that.
Hope its ok for a first try

 

[director15]

yeah i thought it was pretty cool.

 

[PowerDeo]

not a bad first trailer. However, it's more a compilation of shots rather than a trailer. There is no story behind the shot sequences, or at least it wasn't very apparent to me. However, it was a decent selection of shots.

My main recommendation is to be careful of fight scenes. If not shot, blocked and edited properly they can look unprofessionally staged. Try editing your fight scenes together quicker and "cut on the action" to hide the fact that nobodies actually getting hurt. It can help make the illusion more realistic.

I hope this helps! Keep up the good work.

Thanks !! I'll make sure I remember that for my next one. But yeah if i had more time to film and edit the shots i may have shot a few more shots and redone a few to make them look beter. But the problem was that this was actually for a project for school and i didnt have that much time. ... I'll do my best to work out all the mistakes i made in this one.