age_of_ultra
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It's NSFW with some nudity. But please can you critique it? Animation is shoddy plus Im looking into adding voice work as well. Its for a future series.
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Thanks. I'm trying to improve on those.To start of the sound-design was very good. It helped set a scarry/creepy atmosphere. The wierd movement and anatomy of the assassin also made it al the more scary. Another good thing was how the animation played out. First we are introduced to a lady standing in a room with some corpses and dont know whats going on, but then the security footage is played and we now know the true nature of the lady and what presumably happend in the room that she is standing in. On the other hand the posses that the corpses are lying there look very much like ragdools and goofy which takes away from the atmosphere. The texts from the animation programm are also anoying as is the low frame rate. The facial expressions don't look genuin to me, so work on them and the lighting is also a little bad. But all in all it's not that bad. You obviously still have to work and your animation skills, but if this is one of your first animations then keep doing them.
I wish my characters had better shaders. I had to use the filters to disguise those!Looks like an anime / cartoon scene
I am sure you will improve over time!I wish my characters had better shaders. I had to use the filters to disguise those!
Thank you, Maura!I am sure you will improve over time!
And the reason they're in that ragdoll position is explained in my first episode.I am sure you will improve over time!
To start of the sound-design was very good. It helped set a scarry/creepy atmosphere. The wierd movement and anatomy of the assassin also made it al the more scary. Another good thing was how the animation played out. First we are introduced to a lady standing in a room with some corpses and dont know whats going on, but then the security footage is played and we now know the true nature of the lady and what presumably happend in the room that she is standing in. On the other hand the posses that the corpses are lying there look very much like ragdools and goofy which takes away from the atmosphere. The texts from the animation programm are also anoying as is the low frame rate. The facial expressions don't look genuin to me, so work on them and the lighting is also a little bad. But all in all it's not that bad. You obviously still have to work and your animation skills, but if this is one of your first animations then keep doing them.