riyad khoury
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Hello ..
I wrote a script for a feature film and left a gap for some scenes that I couldn't write
I want your help and suggestions
To clarify .. The story talks about a young man who agreed with a friend to marry the wealthy old aunt until she dies, provided that he shares half of her property with him.
She is a mean woman, treating them badly, and the two hate her.
One day, the old woman's relative comes to spend a vacation with her, and the young man admires her, but the girl tells him that she also likes him, but the problem is that he is her aunt's husband and she cannot establish a relationship with him and offends her aunt.
The husband complains to his friend about his aunt and her actions and asks him for a solution because he married her for four years and she did not die and he can no longer bear more than this, so he tells him that there is no solution whether he killed her and since he is traveling with her aunt to Switzerland, he will orchestrate her murder there and bring her body to bury.
His friend travels with his aunt and remains her husband and young girl at home.
Here the problem occurred with me .. What are the scenes and what is the dialogue taking place between the husband and the young girl ... until the call from Switzerland comes to them with the news of the death ?!
Knowing that after her death , the relationship will be strengthened with the husband and the young girl, so he will ask her to marry two months after her aunt's death and she agree.
I wrote the movie with plot, but I am unable to write those scenes! Please help me with suggestions
I wrote a script for a feature film and left a gap for some scenes that I couldn't write
I want your help and suggestions
To clarify .. The story talks about a young man who agreed with a friend to marry the wealthy old aunt until she dies, provided that he shares half of her property with him.
She is a mean woman, treating them badly, and the two hate her.
One day, the old woman's relative comes to spend a vacation with her, and the young man admires her, but the girl tells him that she also likes him, but the problem is that he is her aunt's husband and she cannot establish a relationship with him and offends her aunt.
The husband complains to his friend about his aunt and her actions and asks him for a solution because he married her for four years and she did not die and he can no longer bear more than this, so he tells him that there is no solution whether he killed her and since he is traveling with her aunt to Switzerland, he will orchestrate her murder there and bring her body to bury.
His friend travels with his aunt and remains her husband and young girl at home.
Here the problem occurred with me .. What are the scenes and what is the dialogue taking place between the husband and the young girl ... until the call from Switzerland comes to them with the news of the death ?!
Knowing that after her death , the relationship will be strengthened with the husband and the young girl, so he will ask her to marry two months after her aunt's death and she agree.
I wrote the movie with plot, but I am unable to write those scenes! Please help me with suggestions
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