Need critiques for a 7 pg screenplay ..

[oleg]

.. for my HSC.

Let me know here on this thread if you're interested.

You'll be helping out a 17 yr old student to get the best marks he can get if you help me out by giving me a critique ..

Thanks in advance.

-gelo

 

[xAntiCannabisx]

I will give it a shot.

 

[Andrew]

pass it my pall I'm a critic for a movie company just send it to bobcloset@hotmail.com and I will not....And I repeat I will not give you some lame ass good job bit you are looking at the thresher of all scripts I will tear it apart and give you the suck points and tell you what is plausable.

 

[unforgiven_stu]

I'll take a look, send it my way.

theunderwaterbanana@hotmail.com.


S.Fennimore

 

[Nexus]

I'm your guy!

I'm your guy!

I'm actually writing a few scripts myself. So I'd be more than happy to help:

robert@rockshowdj.com

 

[horin]

with pleasure.. send it.. another opinion is always good.

with pleasure.. send it.. another opinion is always good.

Horinkabalo@yahoo.com