Bolex Short film.

[Phil Kay]

Hay guys I'm new here, this is a copy of a short film I shot with my Bolex, which I just posted online. I'm looking for feedback, good or bad, so that I can make improvements for my next project!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7AZFh3u_d1E

Kind Regards

 

[Daniel Botha]

Is that a New Zealand accent I hear? Greetings from Invercargill, mate. How are ya?

I quite liked this. I got a little lost in the narration a bit, but the visuals made up for that. Overall, a good job.

Cheers,

Dan