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  1. Paul Holloway

    Looking for someone to read my 1st draft of my 1st screenplay?

    I am about almost done with the first draft of my screenplay. I like the story I created but have kept this screenplay to myself with no one having access to read it yet. I need to know what some people think of the story and their opinion on what they think should happen? Let me know if anyone...
  2. Paul Holloway

    Posting Screenplays Online

    Hello I am almost done with the first draft of my screenplay. I am also building a online multimedia portfolio and was think of putting a portion of my script online or maybe the first draft. Is there a way to do this without worrying that someone could still the script and credit it to themself?
  3. Paul Holloway

    Writing A Good Motive and Scene for The Bad Guy?

    All along my screenplay in Act 1 and 2 we get small little parts with the bad guy. By the end of Act II we learn the what the bad guy is really capable of doing. He rapes and murders the main characters love interest. But I guess you say the reset button is hit and the main character has a...
  4. Paul Holloway

    Filming A Oil Painting Scenes?

    I am not begin to film any of these scenes. I am just getting notes for the future production. In my opening scene and a couple other scenes there is a montage of music as the actor is painting a oil painting on a 8x10 canvas. The actor won't know the first thing about painting but somehow I...
  5. Paul Holloway

    Filiming A Open Mic Cafe Scene

    I am not actually filming this right now but in my head I am going over the best ways to make this scene. Later on I am planning on creating my first independent film. Since I don't have right to popular music I was thinking of bringing on the voice of lesser musicians. They are all over my...
  6. Paul Holloway

    Cannon XA10 or Sony HVR-HD1000U MiniDV ?

    I am debating on both of these. I can only get one. Can someone give me the pros and cons of both I like the Sony because of it has access to Mini DV and I can prob play my old MiniDV Tapes and convert it to DVD with my DVD Recorder. Other than that it looks very professional but big like the...
  7. Paul Holloway

    CanonXA10 High Definition 10X Optical Zoom Professional Camcorder?

    I might buy this camera in a couple months. If you own it what is your general view on it. I might use it to film weddings, make some films, family events. Is this a good buy?
  8. Paul Holloway

    Loglines for Screenplays?

    Post your logline for your screenplay and maybe the summary of it and maybe others can come up with a catchy logline. The screenplay I am writing is a hard one. The antagonist doesn't show up till the last 30 minutes. Anyway here is my screenplay logline. I want to create a great logline that...
  9. Paul Holloway

    Kindred Spirits, The Rough Draft Version - Ideas Welcome

    I am writing my first screenplay. I might be taking a screenwriting class later on but this is my first one so there might be formatting issues with. It. I know the 3 basic things you need in it: Scene Heading, Action and Dialog. I haven't added character descriptions yet. That might be the last...
  10. Paul Holloway

    My First Animation (Reflections)

    I made this animation for my Animation class: Reflection - Animation Final Project This was a final project I submitted after taking a Animation class. In that class we learned basic animation with drawing and then went into computer animation with Flash,Adobe After Effects and Photoshop. I...
  11. Paul Holloway

    My first screenplay,I Need Help Figuring Out How To Kill Off A Character

    I am a film student but currently on a LOA from my university. One of the next classes I would of taken would be a screenwriting class. I decided to create my first screenplay without that class but hopefully I can go back to it to get some pointers. During Act 1, the male lead has to leave...
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