Hey guys. I’m new here, and I hope I can be active here in the future.
Firstly, I’m 16, living in Australia and about to undergo HSC (equivalent of SATs). I’m doing film for a portion of this HSC.
We have to stay in a topic of “imaginative” or “psychological” journeys, and I decided to make a short film (7-8mins) on the issue of love, depression, loneliness and suicide. Nothing personal, just inspired by the loads of news articles I have read concerning suicidal teens and their families who don’t care.
Anyway, this is my piece. My first draft. Based on a short monologue I wrote, if anyone wants to read it, just email me.
But the screenplay is available to read here: http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/3ffb9395_127dd/bc/When+We+Were+Happy.txt?bfLdgZDBhVOoORY4
Please post reviews (constructive please!) here in the forum or send to my email.
Thanks in advance.
Firstly, I’m 16, living in Australia and about to undergo HSC (equivalent of SATs). I’m doing film for a portion of this HSC.
We have to stay in a topic of “imaginative” or “psychological” journeys, and I decided to make a short film (7-8mins) on the issue of love, depression, loneliness and suicide. Nothing personal, just inspired by the loads of news articles I have read concerning suicidal teens and their families who don’t care.
Anyway, this is my piece. My first draft. Based on a short monologue I wrote, if anyone wants to read it, just email me.
But the screenplay is available to read here: http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/3ffb9395_127dd/bc/When+We+Were+Happy.txt?bfLdgZDBhVOoORY4
Please post reviews (constructive please!) here in the forum or send to my email.
Thanks in advance.
You can email the script to me if you like (address is in my profile), I'm pretty good at all things to do with English so I will see what I can do.
