Whats a good start?

[Red Prince]

Is it in English?

Don't worry. You'll understand it. :lol:

 

[director15]

Is it in English?

Don't worry. You'll understand it. :lol:

all right

 

[TMegens]

Thanks for the reply on the video (I assume it was director15?) . I'm kind of suprised by the compliments.
Got any tips what i have to keep in mind the next time?

 

[MRoytman]

Thanks for the reply on the video (I assume it was director15?) . I'm kind of suprised by the compliments.
Got any tips what i have to keep in mind the next time?

Sure. Try to not cut off your actor's head as much (it was mostly an issue in the opening shot). Also, maybe the pacing could be a little tighter...such as less shots of just walking?

 

[sebs2112]

That was actually me who commented.
One Tip: it isnt necesary to all of that walking from the house to the woods, the audience will understand whats happening if you ust show him leaving the house and then walkng into the woods.
Also: you might want to try using some jump cuts or something in the opening so that people dont get bored of just watching you around your kitchen

 

[TMegens]

Yes, totally true. Ill take it with me. Thanks.