Unproduced short film screenplay ripe for production

[director15]

Hey guys I wrote this short film for an online short film screenplay competition and I finished second in the competition. If your interested in filming this please p.m. me.
Heres the link: http://pc.celtx.com/project/CTaJapaX44rJ

 

[andre]

Hi. I'm new to these boards so I'll try my best to give a fellow newbie the proper respect he deserves . I read your screenplay and I liked it. Interesting idea. However, the final monologue does seem a bit too long and I realize that's the point but there are some bits that could definitely be snipped. All in all, it was an interesting concept. Nice job.

 

[director15]

Thanks.

 

[director15]

Thanks man. I'm actually developing this into a feature so I'll keep that in mind.