starting out, need help

[CJA1976]

after many years of wanting to write a screen play i have just finished my first, i was wondering if there are others out there that would like to throw ideas about and generally help each other in writing screen plays. Like a surgery of sorts just people who want to get ideas out there and see what other people think.
Cheers
Chris

chrisfinn7604@aol.com

 

[MRoytman]

Do you mean throw ideas in terms of concepts for screenplays or for writing them?

If you mean for writing them, then I got to ask if you just wrote your first screenplay draft or have gone through many many drafts and now consider yourself done. If its the first then there's still a lot of work to be done. Take some time away from your screenplay and edit edit edit.

One thing that I've been focusing on lately since I've actually started filmmaking is that if a word, phrase, or line doesn't have to be verbally stated it shouldn't at all.

Thats all for now.

Good job on finishing your own Screenplay!