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ibassplayer205
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Heres a screen play I have been working on for about a month now. Not everyday (as I should have been) but every once in a while I would get an idea for the story and put it in its place. I posted it at two other forums (renderositys directors cut and wrtiers forums) and havent had much luck with them telling me what they think. Also, the one other person that has read it (online) tells me that there are some grammar errors. The really SAD thing (I emphasize SAD, almost pathetic) is that I am a college student and I can't find these errors. Anyway, just wondering if a couple people would be kind enough to read my screen play and tell me what you think. Thanks
The link is to a zipped PDF file.
http://www.sethkoberg.com/TheHit.zip
The link is to a zipped PDF file.
http://www.sethkoberg.com/TheHit.zip