Episode 2 of my short film series.... feedback?

[capncrunch84]

HopScotch & CrackerJack - Episode 2 - The Suicide Hotline

CrackerJack is feeling suicidal, until HopScotch comes to the rescue... sort of.



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5xm0ysFsAl8

 

[DBXMe2]

very clean set up, I can tell you spend time to light... Maybe?!?!?! and art direction, setting your scene with the stuff you need.

a few suggestions for your next episodes. I noticed you only have like 2 different shots for both the guys. Seeing that its short, it works, but if you want to get people more engaged get close to the characters, like shoulder shot, then pull back to a mid shot during the convos...

this going in and out will keep us interested, + its a great way to tell the viewer "HEY LOOK this parts important!"

GJ, hope to see your stories develop more soon!