Critique wanted

[Caterpillar-print]

Hello peoplez

I'm a teen filmmaker lacking experience and I'm wondering if I should continue to develop this short film script. It's a very short script about a man who thought too much, he had to stop himself from thinking. if anyone wants to read it then leave a post and your email

 

[temerson]

Finish. The worst thing a screenwriter can do is not finish a script.

 

[lotrfan]

I'd be interested in reading it. My email is thelordoftheringsfan@gmail.com

 

[Kim Welch]

i would not post your e-mail online

i would not post your e-mail online

i would not post my e-mail online like this.

 

[lotrfan]

Can I remove it? Thanks for the suggestion though.