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A nice, clear differentiation between Inciting Incident and Call To Adventure: http://www.clickok.co.uk/Inciting-Incident-versus-Call-To-Adventure-Resolved.html

A recommendation: http://www.youtube.com/user/clickokdotcodotuk Over the last year, the guy has started regularly deconstructing movies and putting the videos online. Everyone that I have spoken to that has watched the videos finds them useful. I'm a big fan.

Here's a breakdown of it (Hangover 2) : http://youtu.be/tVHQUhUnbrk

structuring a screenplay structuring a screenplay Marriage is another one.

Make Screenwriting FUN Make Screenwriting FUN Every screenwriter needs to look at Kal Bashir's excellent 510 stage hero's journey material at http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html

Keep in mind that whoever you're submitting to is a business. There is no set way to do it except keep it professional and to the point. There is nothing wrong with submitting two projects.

Best Screenwriting Books Best Screenwriting Books 510+ stage hero's journey at http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html and these related videos http://www.youtube.com/user/clickokdotcodotuk

Jessica Alba Offends Jessica Alba Offends She probably does offend - but she's a ready-to-go ditzy heroine if you know how to position her. So in that sense, she's a gift to screenwriters. I'm not a fan of hers, but I can see some funny / almost tragic story there. What really offends...

Suggest you view the youtube deconstruction of The Social Network (2010) at http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html

I see you have taken the Harry Potter/Star Wars comparison from http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html but there are other useful ones there also; you should link directly to the site. I always refer to it. In fact, the Harry Potter/Star Wars comparison is a bad one to choose as it imples the...

Hmmm. Number of things you should do: a) Work as an actor for a bit. Get to see how they think, feel...enables you to relate to them. b) Understand human dynamics. Each human interaction is a transaction, usually status based. Read Keith Johnstone's "Impro." Will help you to create real...

I see nothing wrong with the idea at all. Of course it needs structure etc. But you're onto a winner. As long as you can keep this original spontaneity going.

"The Last King of Scotland" and "Match Point" are structurally identical. There are minor archetypal (and therefore functional role) differences, but that's all. With structure, I always say refer to Kal at http://www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html @M2 Entertainment When you say "a story well told,"...

:) Most Romantic Comedies ARE Coming of Age stories (maturation is implicit).

Don't Worry About It Don't Worry About It Don't worry about it so much. Take your hero et al through the journey (see www.clickok.co.uk/index4.html); you will go through plenty of rewrites before production and the issues will be cleared up then.