Saren - Short Action Film (20:00)

[Uthada]

Hey all! I don't post here often. This is my first short film. I used this forum to get some help composing, and I figured I'd post it here to get a little more exposure. I learned a lot, and despite it's flaws I'm pretty proud of it. I'd appreciate any feedback! Thanks!

 

[alicorleone]

Nice job dude.
The actions are good.
In the car scene I would add a camera as a dash cam (for showing the interior wide shot in the car)

 

[Uthada]

Yes. I do community theatre, and I had just started up back when I shot this, so I got some of them to help me.