fridayjack1
New member
Actually, instead of posting a short plot. I'll basically tell you what happens xD
A teenager (Violet) ends up drug dealing after a man (Damien) gives her the job. She needs the money because her mother is in debt. Soon she falls for him. He soon learns Violet's mother hates her because her stepfather forced himself on her when she was underage, a few times (Violet ended up falling in love with him)
So soon Violet runs away with Damien and he is soon killed by a drug dealer. And we soon learn Violet has some illness (???) and ends up getting revenge on the drug dealer by seducing him then burning him alive.
Thoughts?
BE HONEST. And feedback on how I can improve it
A teenager (Violet) ends up drug dealing after a man (Damien) gives her the job. She needs the money because her mother is in debt. Soon she falls for him. He soon learns Violet's mother hates her because her stepfather forced himself on her when she was underage, a few times (Violet ended up falling in love with him)
So soon Violet runs away with Damien and he is soon killed by a drug dealer. And we soon learn Violet has some illness (???) and ends up getting revenge on the drug dealer by seducing him then burning him alive.
Thoughts?
BE HONEST. And feedback on how I can improve it