New Short Film: My Brother

[cliffrockshire]

Hey Guys,

I would love it if you check out my new short film I just completed titled "My Brother".

Here is a brief synopsis: Life is unconventional for Preston and Miles, two brothers who share a unique bond. My Brother tells the story of their daily attempt to live normal lives despite facing certain, unusual challenges. Their dynamic co-dependence is the key to overcoming their struggles and finding happiness.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZTXDO-Z0Ah4

Let me know what you think! Thanks!

 

[Kim Welch]

Good Good

Good Good

Very good. Good images. Good editing. I like the music. I like the way the sound starts when the brothers are entering the building. Good acting in the waiting room. Interview dialoged could have used some work to give it a little more punch. I like the ears and eyes feeling. I can see but I could not hear the guy talking makes me feel I cannot see but I can hear what I am seeing or something that gives me a relating feeling to the blind brother. Car shots, cuts and use of the camera through the mirror are nice. Good, please do more. Like to see something like this with developing relationships or life cycles and conflicts with the brothers interaction and tension resolution between them as it relates to those they date, marry, love and die with.