New Short Film: Fall of Cain

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Fall of Cain

Grade 12 Communications Technology Short Movie

An epic story about a man named Cain, a former crime syndicate member who rats on his associates to get his sentenced reduced. Soon after Cain's release, the syndicate comes after him and Cain finds out that living a normal life is merely a dream.

Remember this is only a student video so be kind with your comments please.

Part 1
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=W-rUoxxePKw

Part 2
http://ca.youtube.com/watch?v=U3vIclAp9m4

Enjoy!

 

[Kim Welch]

Part 1

Part 1

Music from Movie Blade Runner. Acting need improvement. For the school work I suggest you
Get someone from outside of your immediate circle of friends.
If you are going to use actors from the school see if you can get them
From the theater department or get the ones that were in the school plays. I like the Ten years later jump. I like the narrative voice over when the ex mobster is mopping. Why would the feds give him an apartment hell hole. They don’t give you anything when you get out of prison. The fight scene needs work. The sweating bullets in the 5 below was a little corny. When you spit on someone spit on them. The sound it off sync in the bosses office. Good work. I am sure you did the best with what you had at the school. Now take it the next step and improve with your next production. what did you think? what did you learn? what kind of camera did you use and what did you edit it with.