My Short Film

[hardyc3]

Hey Everyone,
I have recently made a short called "A Death in the Family," If you have a few minutes, please check it out and vote for it. Also leave me some feed back if you can. Just click the link:
Here

 

[StephenDurden]

Re: Vote at theproject.tv

Re: Vote at theproject.tv

Hey Everyone,
I have recently made a short called "A Death in the Family," If you have a few minutes, please check it out and vote for it. Also leave me some feed back if you can. Just click the link:
Here

Hope you don't mind if I throw some feedback here

Well, I liked it a lot and voted it. The cinematography is awesome, the best aspect of the short. The sound is good, but you could have improved the FX (they sound a bit fake to me). Story and acting are so so...

Probably the pace of all the stuff should have been faster... I mean, the guy's hurt, but the enemies are still shooting. Someone should have taken him far from that spot (no trees in front of him, no repair...) and they should have just rushed things up.

Good effort though. Keep it going!

 

[hardyc3]

Looks like we didn't make it on to the next round but I would appreciate any feedback on the other two episodes.
You can find links to them at http://www.offthewallfilms.com/films/shorts/shorts.html

Thanks in advance,
Hardy