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Prince_Van
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EDIT: There should be a "?" behind "the right way" in the title ^^ As I do not want to show that is the right way, but want to know IF I am on the right way 
Sorry for that *g*
Hey there,
my name is David, 24, from Germany (so actually German is my native language), and I am trying to write my first screenplay. I am not a professional writer, and my English is far from being perfect, but I just want to give it a try... So far I've got like 10 pages, and it would be really kind if some of you just give it a quick look and tell me if I am on the right way, or what to change / do better. I just need some critics and some good words for my enthusiasm
Thank you very much, and here it is (plain text): http://www.text-upload.com/read.php?id=119041&c=4459011
Never mind the layout - the upload killed it :-( But I am using final draft, so it should (actually) be right
Sorry for that *g*Hey there,
my name is David, 24, from Germany (so actually German is my native language), and I am trying to write my first screenplay. I am not a professional writer, and my English is far from being perfect, but I just want to give it a try... So far I've got like 10 pages, and it would be really kind if some of you just give it a quick look and tell me if I am on the right way, or what to change / do better. I just need some critics and some good words for my enthusiasm
Thank you very much, and here it is (plain text): http://www.text-upload.com/read.php?id=119041&c=4459011
Never mind the layout - the upload killed it :-( But I am using final draft, so it should (actually) be right
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