First comedy - please tell me what you think

[Spike]

Hey everyone,

I'm new here. Desperate to meet and talk with people with the same interests as me! I've just finished working on a series of short comedies about a character called Ken which I'd love to have some constructive feedback on.

Here's a link to one of the videos:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0dGYEVKJCc0

The title music is our own, with the other tracks paid for and downloaded from royalty-free music websites.

Please tell me what you think!

 

[Mr Taylor]

It's very good!
The core of it is great.
The acting is great.
He story is great.
the timing is great.
Mostly, it's entertaining.
There are a few little technical niggles, but that's to be expacted on a low budget.
I would be happy to watch that on TV for a half hour each week.
The music and graphic art content give it a nice feel.
The energy of the whole thing is very good also.

 

[Spike]

thanks for that mr taylor! thanks for taking the time to watch. yeah the technical niggles need ironing out. i think the lighting and sound needs some work.