critique my parody

[moneyhouse]

Hi, I've put about 3 months of work into my latest video, a parody on razor scooting. But I've seen it maybe a hundred times now so I need some outside feedback in order to make it better, Would anyone be kind enough to download it and critique it for me?

I have a website for it at http://www.extremerazoring.com

or if you just would like to watch the video -
http://www.extremerazoring.com/razor_movie.mov

-Charlie Winter