oscarknott
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I am making a 5 min short film, and this is an idea i had:
- Guy in a red shirt a green cap is driving along at night
- Another guy in a similar red shirt and green cap with a white duffle bag is hitch-hiking
- Man in car picks up hitchiker
- Man driving car turns on radio
- Menwhile hithicker notices duffle bag in back of car
- Radio: "Theirs a killer on the loose that is wearing a red shirt and green cap and a white duffle bag... ectt..."
- Men in car freak out, audience dont know which one is killer
- After moments of struggle, driver gets distracted and hits someone with his car
- they both freak out and get out car quickly
- the person they hit is a girl in a red shirt green cap and with a white duffle bag with a body in it
WAT DO U THINK, please give me advice
- Guy in a red shirt a green cap is driving along at night
- Another guy in a similar red shirt and green cap with a white duffle bag is hitch-hiking
- Man in car picks up hitchiker
- Man driving car turns on radio
- Menwhile hithicker notices duffle bag in back of car
- Radio: "Theirs a killer on the loose that is wearing a red shirt and green cap and a white duffle bag... ectt..."
- Men in car freak out, audience dont know which one is killer
- After moments of struggle, driver gets distracted and hits someone with his car
- they both freak out and get out car quickly
- the person they hit is a girl in a red shirt green cap and with a white duffle bag with a body in it
WAT DO U THINK, please give me advice