1st Student Film project

writegirl

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Hi:

Next semester I will be doing my first project, filming a scene from a screenplay I wrote. Help!!

Any suggestions on dv camera, lighting, sound, etc., would be very much appreciated!

I will most likely be choosing an interior scene requiring 2 - 4 actors.

Thank you!

writegirl
 
what kind of scene?

what kind of scene?

What is the setting?
What is the mood?
What is happening between the people?
Can you post the script here so we can thing about what is going on and make suggestions?
What are you trying to tell the audience and how are you telling it?
What kind of money do you have?
Does the school have equipment including lights?
 
What Kind of Scene

What Kind of Scene

Hi!

Thank you for your reply. The setting is present day New York City. It's a romantic comedy.

I'm a distance learning student so I don't have immediate access to any school equipment.

I do have some money available to get equipment but it will be a pretty tight budget.

The mood is light, comedic. There are some serious moments but I want to shoot one of the comedy scenes.

I haven't decided exactly which of the scenes to shoot but I can definitely post the script for everyone to have a look.

I'm off to work now but will post the script later.

Thank you very much for your help! I appreciate this so much!
 
word doc script scenes

word doc script scenes

Hi!

I have a word doc file with a couple of scenes I'm considering for shooting. Can you tell me how I can attach the file?


Sorry! Thanks
 
Can you copy and paste it as plain text?

Can you copy and paste it as plain text?

Hi:

Here it is. Basically, there are 2 couples, Karen and Robert who are engaged and their friends, the 2nd couple, Ian and Elizabeth. Ian and Elizabeth have had bad past relationships (which they haven't shared with each other) and have mutually agreed to have a "no strings" relationship.
Elizabeth is now obsessed with trying to get the upper hand in this non-relationship. I don't know which scene to pick.

Thank you for your help!

:)

18 INT. KAREN'S BEDROOM - NIGHT 18

Front cover of a book. The title: "WHO'S AFRAID OF VIRGINIA
WOOLF." Karen reads the book in bed. Robert walks into the bedroom. Karen shoves the book under the covers. Robert rummages through an overnight bag, pulls out papers.

KAREN
Maybe she wanted me and he didn't.

ROBERT
Your parents divorce had nothing
to do with you.

KAREN
Maybe he wanted me and she didn't.

ROBERT
I'm staying with my original
answer.

KAREN
Maybe she never wanted to be
writing partners. Maybe he never
wanted to be writing partners.

A look of revelation from Karen.


KAREN
(continuing)
What if being writing partners
destroyed their marrriage. And now
we're going to be -

ROBERT
Don't even say it.

Robert walks off into the bathroom. The sound of water
RUNNING.

ROBERT (O.S.)
You're never going to figure this
out.

Karen takes the book out from under the covers, flips pages.

KAREN
You don't know that. How do you
know that? There has to be a
reason for two people falling out
of love and into hatred.
(taps the book)
Just look at George and Martha.
Something must've happened to make
my parents throw away a twenty
year marriage -- and partnership.

The water goes OFF.

ROBERT (O.S.)
Are you still reading that book?
Didn't I buy you Shakespeare's
comedies?

Karen winces at being caught, shoves the book back under the
covers.

KAREN
Tragedy can be comical, in a
deeply disturbed way.

Robert walks out of the bathroom. He sits by Karen, gives her a kiss. As he kisses her he reaches under the covers, takes the book, tosses it away.




ROBERT
Your parents may be George and
Martha but we are not, and it's
going to be a beautiful wedding.

KAREN
Especially since the maid of honor
and best man are growing closer.
Maybe we should have them over for
dinner.

Robert gets up, goes over to his bag, rifles through papers.

ROBERT
No, we should not. We're not
getting involved. They won't last
the summer.

KAREN
How do you know that? You don't
know that. She wasn't always like this and
it's just dinner.

Robert turns to Karen.

ROBERT
Look, if they make it, that's
fine. If not, it wasn't meant to
be. Manifest Destiny. It's their
life, not ours.

KAREN
Manifest Destiny was about U.S.
land expansion in the eighteen
hundreds.

Robert comes over with a small pile of papers, crawls into bed.

ROBERT
You know what I mean. Their
relationship will either expand or
not expand but not because of us.
We're out of it. Agreed?

Karen sighs. Robert waits.



KAREN
Manifest Destiny. We're out of it.

ROBERT
Good.

Robert picks up the papers, reads.

ROBERT
(continuing)
Karen, why is the happy couple in
our play, a comedy, filing for
divorce?

Karen looks away, embarrassed.



33 INT. ELIZABETH'S BEDROOM - MORNING 33

Elizabeth wakes up. She looks over at Ian. He sleeps. She
creeps out of bed and slips out the door.

IAN in bed. One eye opens.


34 INT. ELIZABETH'S KITCHEN - MORNING 34

Elizabeth puts up a pot of coffee as she whispers into the
phone.

ELIZABETH
Guess who's here. Yes he is. It
took three hours. I finally did
it! I have the upper hand!

A NOISE is heard from the bedroom.

ELIZABETH
(continuing)
I've got to go. Call you later.


35 INT. KAREN'S APARTMENT - MORNING 35

Karen holds the phone. Robert looks at her for explanation.
She smiles sheepishly.


36 INT. ELIZABETH'S KITCHEN - A FEW MINUTES LATER 36

Ian shuffles into the kitchen, dressed. Elizabeth is on air
as she pours coffee for them both. He lights a cigarette.

ELIZABETH
Now that we've mastered breakfast,
how about a cozy lunch?

IAN
I can't.

ELIZABETH
You've been working non-stop. You
can have lunch.


IAN
I'm meeting someone for lunch.

ELIZABETH
Having business lunches with
clients doesn't count. Trust me.

IAN
Not a client. A friend.

Elizabeth comes back down to terra firma.

ELIZABETH
OH -- a friend. Lydia?

IAN
Uh-hunh.

Elizabeth is completely deflated.

ELIZABETH
Lydia's back. That's great.
(subtitle: What does
she mean to you?)


IAN
Mmhmm.
(subtitle: None of
your business.)


Elizabeth bangs plates around as she puts them away.

ELIZABETH
How long did you say you've known
her?
(subtitle: How long
were you sleeping
with her?)


IAN
I don't know - a while.
(subtitle: I'm not
going to tell you.



ELIZABETH
So, you're going to meet at a
restaurant?
(Subtitle: You're
going to her hotel,
aren't you?)


IAN
Maybe.
(subtitle: Maybe.)


ELIZABETH
That'll be nice. The two of you
can catch up.
(subtitle: I don't
care if you sleep
with her.)


IAN
Un-hunh.
(subtitle: Yes you
do.)


Ian gets up to leave. He goes to kiss her.

IAN
(continuing)
See you for dinner?

She gives him a quick kiss with a plastic smile and nods her head.


37 INT. KAREN'S APARTMENT - MORNING 37

ELIZABETH PACES AS KAREN MUNCHES TOAST AND WATCHES.

KAREN
You actually still have the upper
hand.

Elizabeth stops pacing.

ELIZABETH
How do you figure?


KAREN
Well, he's seeing you tonight, so
you've broken the one day on,
three days off.

Elizabeth is back to pacing.

ELIZABETH
No, no. He still has the upper
hand. He has the lunch thing. That
supercedes the one day on, three
days off.
(stops, thinks, paces
again)
Okay, okay. He's not the only
person who can have lunch.

Robert walks into the kitchen. Elizabeth stops, looks right
at him. She walks up to him, snaps her purse up from the
table nearby.

ELIZABETH
(continuing)
He's not the only person who can
have lunch.

Elizabeth struts out.

Robert looks to Karen.

ROBERT
Promise you won't tell me.

KAREN
Okay, but I don't know how long I
can hold out.
 
Your first scene

Your first scene

writegirl:

First, since you are only filming one scene from your screenplay, you need to make sure it is a scene that people will enjoy and can understand without knowing the entire backstory of your movie. From reading the bit of script you pasted, I am already somewhat confused, so you need to make sure that your one scene is clear. Even if you explain that your scene is part of a larger movie, if your viewers cannot understand the choices your actors are making, they will not be able to give you clear feedback on the scene.

For technical issues, consider how everything relates to your scene. If these people have a great divide between them, perhaps there should be weak lighting between them. Use camera angles to set the scene, tell the story, and describe the relationships between the two people. Your images alone should be able to describe the scene to someone watching. If one character gets the upper hand (as you spoke of), he or she could be shot from a lower angle than the other character, to emphasize his or her power.

Some technical issues are purely ones of quality - unless you decide to purposefully go low-tech. Camera format and quality will effect your capabilities with the image. 35mm filmmakers have to make different choices from Hi-8 filmmakers, because a little camcorder cannot render great detail. For your film, which is full of conflict and is mostly interiors, even a handheld video camera could be used to great effect. And of course, audio always has to be great. Spend time getting your sound right.

I hope this has been of some use to you, or anyone else!
 

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