Echovoid_52
Member
Hey. Here are all the songs. The camera man got murked. Denton kills him. You can hear his scream as the footage becomes corrupted during Dentons charge.
Thank you! Haha yeah the syringe is pure laziness on my part. I could def fix that. Glad you mostly enjoyed itI just finished watching the movieOverall, the plot was original. You should label it 18+ though.
I will go on with a few pros and cons that I noticed during my watch time (I watched it twice to be sure)
Pros
The soundtrack is on spot, I like that
The plot is original - I like how you used the old vcr cassette to tell some of the story - the edit is also on spot. One question...since that character died in 2014, meaning the content on the cassette is filmed after 2014, why did they not just use a smartphone or a modern camera to film it?Maybe modify the plot from 2014 to 2004 and it is more natural then from this perspective
The costumes are very good as well - and the building from minute 12 is huge
You managed to show the girl's fate without getting so much into what actually happened to her - the expression on her lover's face tells so much emotion
The actors are doing their part very good, too
Cons
At minute 10:21, the syringe had no needle (I looked twice and stopped to check) and then he puts the content of the syringe in her neck. Maybe put a needle for the close up and then try another angle and get rid of the needle for the next part
The night scenes are a bit blurry, especially at minute 3 and 4. Maybe try using an external light or a powerful flash light for a better quality
All the 18+ material was me just shooting porn from the internet off my TV and adding noise to it to make it look 16mm and dirty. If I had my choice I'd shoot those scenes myself, but I'm not a hollywood director with a big budget. in fact, this film cost like $0 to make lol.
Thanks for the feedback everyone!
