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[patrick2690]

Hi Guys,

Here are few shorts I've created, let me know what you guys thing. This has more of a International Flavour. Thx

Try this link.

http://www.finalsequence.com

www.finalsequence.com

 

[filmsforever]

First One

First One

It got off to a slow start and there were some moments it did not conect well for me. i thought it was going in the direction of an anti drinking movie. It became much more interesting when she came home and got on the phone.. . but dont' you think she would have seen his car? The acting might have been a little better but I know you didn't have the budget for A actors. Over all good work man.

 

[patrick2690]

Thanks for the feed back. He left his car at the parking lot since it wasn't starting and he was saying that to his friend on the phone. May be I should've expanded that scene to explain it better.