jpark
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i've just finished a script i started to write a few months ago
and i'm just trying to get feedback from different people.
anyone care to read?
its not a thriller, comedy, documentary or anything
its more of a drama/romance but not really romance.
Its not a final draft becausse i havent added the dialogue yet :/
i really suck at writing witty and humorous ways
so i just want some feedback on the story.
in terms of if you understand the story, because some of my friends read it and said it was weird D:
so anyways, anyone interested?!
it would be greatly appreciated!
BASIC STORYLINE/spoiler
it's a story about a boy who doesnt understand why people have emotions and wants to get away from the emotions surrounding him.
i've just finished a script i started to write a few months ago
and i'm just trying to get feedback from different people.
anyone care to read?
its not a thriller, comedy, documentary or anything
its more of a drama/romance but not really romance.
Its not a final draft becausse i havent added the dialogue yet :/
i really suck at writing witty and humorous ways
so i just want some feedback on the story.
in terms of if you understand the story, because some of my friends read it and said it was weird D:
so anyways, anyone interested?!
it would be greatly appreciated!
BASIC STORYLINE/spoiler
it's a story about a boy who doesnt understand why people have emotions and wants to get away from the emotions surrounding him.
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