Watermelon - Short Film super 16mm (4 min)

[gilbert]

I shot this movie for my master degree in cinematography in lebanon,please if anyone have any comments to tell me ,it will be appreciated.

Link : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aYy10Yk1KmI

 

[Kim Welch]

Sounds and Expectations

Sounds and Expectations

I was expecting something to happen that never did happen. though i liked the lighting and the camera placement on the girl. i think the sound needs to be improved so that it matches the dream better. over all it is good. i am sure you know that you are learning and improving each day.

 

[gilbert]

Thank you Kim for your comment ,
i really appreciate that you liked the way of the cam and the light were placed , this is the most important part for me in this project,by the way what did you expected to happen at the end , and for the sound i will check with my sound editor
Thanks

Gilbert F