this is final try

[KAI]

http://www.angelfire.com/planet/4sb/SB.swf

I think it really works.

If doesn't, I gonna quit angelfire. :x

 

[jondisla]

Great film i think the shots were well done. The fade ins and outs on both the music and dialog were too noticeable at times. A little bit of noise reduction could have eliviated that; the music just stops near the beginning of the last scene lol just cut your track to make it shorter that's all. Anyways filmwise i liked it. Keep up the good work Kai.