Sinner - Short

That's pretty good for your first short, it's a cool story, the visuals look nice, some of the coloring maybe a little off, the editing is fairly good, and the sound isn't bad but could be cleaned up. Overall great job keep doing them and they'll get better and better.
 
It's nice to meet a fellow Romanian here as well. :) I like how you managed to tell a good story without using any words. Great job!
 
Hi, I'm Alex and this is my first short :) any feedback is welcome

I liked it! And I learned a couple of Romanian words too. Sin wasn't just what he did, it was that he did it all within the context of his religious practice, as if an actual part of it. Provocative. Or was he a serial killer always trying to "balance" his acts with praying but with no intention of repenting and changing? Or was he not praying but mocking god or religion as a prelude to his acts of hatred? This one sparked a lot of thought in me.
 

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