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Gohanto
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Hi, I'm a student filmmaker and I just completed a 7 minute short film "Journal" and would love to hear what people have to say about it.
http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~adonkle/index.htm
Any comments on what to improve would be appreciated.
Two notes on it, the sound was done in camera (currently working on buying a shotgun mic) and at the time of shooting I hadn't really thought about cinematography (just bought two lights and built a bounce card for my next film), so you'll notcie a few spots where those things show through.
Thanks,
Alex
http://web.ics.purdue.edu/~adonkle/index.htm
Any comments on what to improve would be appreciated.
Two notes on it, the sound was done in camera (currently working on buying a shotgun mic) and at the time of shooting I hadn't really thought about cinematography (just bought two lights and built a bounce card for my next film), so you'll notcie a few spots where those things show through.
Thanks,
Alex