Seeking Feedback On My Latest Short Film

[nhoefly]

Hey Everyone,
I'm looking for real feedback, good or bad. It's only 2.5 minutes so give it a chance.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1NO8qBO93OM

-Nick, Student Filmmaker

 

[asianballer88]

soso

 

[Godzdna]

for dog pee try using yellow food coloring to saturate the water. The slap needs to look more real. besides those 2 factors i enjoyed the cinematography. keep it going pal.

 

[7om8o87]

Really nice colour grading.

 

[Kim Welch]

keep working

keep working

do you have a networking page?

http://networking.studentfilmmakersforums.com

?

Kim

 

[nhoefly]

Much Appreciation...

Much Appreciation...

Thanks for all of your constructive comments. They will really help me.

-Nick