Hiya;
I'm with Maura on writing what works for your own needs, at any given time. Seems like for every
"Thou Shalt NOT" where online script formatting advice is concerned, there's invariably a
"Thou MUST" waiting just one click away!
Here’s how character-details got treated in an amazingly successful series like the BBC-America’s “Killing Eve” script:
SCRIPT_Killing-Eve-S02E02-Nice-and-Neat.pdf
EXT. SUBURBAN STREET - DAWN
The crack of dawn. And the family from the Calais service station park up. The parents get out and carry their small, sleeping daughters up to the front door.
The SMALLEST GIRL’S eyes open as her father waits for his wife to open the front door. She’s looking over his shoulder back at the car.
Small Girl’s POV: the car trunk pops open and Villanelle sits up.
Villanelle sees that the Small Girl has spotted her, she puts her fingers to lips: shhh.
The terrified Girl stays silent as her father carries her inside.
ABOUT ME: My name is Denise. I am a freelance
Banter-Dialogue Specialist who'd love to work with other creatives requiring
enhancement of the comedic elements of their work.
Here's a brief sample of my present online writing:
PORTFOLIO LINKS: The first two of the three selections of sample-writing are presently being hosted on the British movie-review website ComedyToWatch.com:
(1) Excerpted from a web-comic series entitled “
Quackiavelli;” Click link to view sample-segment:
https://comedytowatch.com/2021/09/03/quackiavelli-episode-11/
(2) Excerpted from a weekly movie-related byline entitled: “
Now That’s What I Call Much Better: Bridgerton (2020).” Click link to view sample article:
https://comedytowatch.com/2021/05/07/now-thats-what-i-call-much-better-bridgerton-2020/
Cheers!
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Denise J.
Email: deejaybim@yahoo.com