At A Loss For Words

[FarFromTheFilter]

Hi, I just happen to stumble upon this place and thought it might be a good
place to get some feedback. A friend and I just finished work on part one of
our first movie. We both did all the work on this movie. I know, I know. The
acting isn't the greatest, but we just graduated high school and neither of
us are really interested in acting. I got a Panasonic DVX-100 for graduation.
Any criticism is appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8co1A832kHw

 

[FarFromTheFilter]

Thanks!

Thanks!

Yeah it was a two man production, our first one. I did most of the camera work / composition
and all of the editing. I wanted to make something to show people I have talent otherwise
its hard to get people to commit to a project such as this, ya know?

I think you're right about the acting; its not so much the acting, but the script. I don't like the script
and I'm not the best scriptwriter. I'm more interested in the cinematography/directing aspect.
Hopefully when I go to college in the spring I'll find some connections.

Thanks for watching! I'm struggling to find constructive feedback that isn't from my friends. and your's helped. :-D