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Hi guys, I'm a second year film student who has recently set up a production company with 3 colleagues named Four Candles Productions - www.fourprod.co.uk We've recently released our first comedy short 'Non Smoking Breaks' If you have a spare two minutes i'd really appreciate you taking a...

So I'm just looking for some honest critisism. If you've ever worked in comedy you know that when you're neck deep in production you lose track of how funny the joke is. Let me know if we succeded or let me know what you might have done differently. Hungry Face...