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Thanks man I really do appreciate the feedback, I'll deff use it on the second draft if I do one but like I said it was just a quick draft for me and my friends to throw together. Really just a long chase sequence. I do have other stuff that I am working on that I consider to be far superior...

Thanks for the honest feedback I hope you eventually finish up. I'm not defensive at all but I will say this lol my formating was perfect it was the copy and pasting that messed it up and I wasn't about to go through and reformat 14 pages.

19 views and no feedback? Come on praise me or rip me apart lol

Ok folks here is a screenplay that I wrote for me and my friends to film. It's not anything groundbreaking and certainly not the best screenplay I've written but its the shortest so I figured it would be the easiest to get feedback on ... btw my formating is nearly perfect it just gets f'ed up...

I am considering going there, do any of you folks have any feedback on it or any general info at all. Thanks in advance :D