Recent content by Messiah

I'd like to get involved. Sounds fun :) If someone could send me more info on what to do and such, it'd be great.

Exactly the kind of response I was looking for: an honest one. Yeah, I was thinking that some of it looked pretty cliché/unoriginal, but just needed a second opinion. I shall take a stab at revising it (majorly) into something hopefully more original. Thanks for the critique :)

Hey everyone. After a year of thinking out the story and such, I have been in the process of writing my first screenplay entitled "Revolution". Setting: Wahington D.C., year 2016 Plot: Jack Phoenix was a young boy of eight years, growing up in a troubled time. A time where a corrupt...