Recent content by jojo

sure sure how long of a snippet do you think is appropriate, first 15 pages or is that too long

Hi this is my first feature length, not yet finished, looking for feedback!!! ASAP because I want to submit it into some contests, please be honest yet constructive. it is 90 pages long and I don't have a server, so I would need to email an attachment to you!! please tell me if your...